Revisions

Tom asked me to make a post with things I think need to be revised for my animation.

1. The 4 dancing kids are disproportionate. Their torsos are too long.
2. I need more inbetweens to transition from the perfume-cloud-4 to the bumps on a log.
3. about 2-3 more inbetweens for the part where the red shirt lands on the boy. His arms go down too fast and it’s hard to tell what happened. Also, more inbetweens to get him off screen. He could cartwheel out or something like that.
4. The 4 cars that zoom past could use some smoke/gas clouds trailing behind them.

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